License for approval

[Allison shi]

Thanks Russ for pointing out couple of my careless misspelling, I appreciate 
it. Thanks for entered the license into Trac.

We are about to open our Document Reader (UOMLReader) and Document Writer 
(UOMLWriter) source codes to the public, and maybe other source codes in the 
future. The license is intend to at a certain way to protect ourselves.  We 
prefer, as Russ pointed out, that people can use the source codes conform 
with our UOML standard 
(http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/tc_home.php?wg_abbrev=uoml-x).

Best rgds,

Allison Shi
Sursen Corp.


-----Original Message-----
From: Russ Nelson <nelson at crynwr.com>
To: license-review at opensource.org
Date: Thu, 27 Mar 2008 16:33:18 -0400
Subject: Re: License for approval


Simon Phipps writes:
 > Would you be so kind as to explain the differences in this license and  
 > their intent please? As license stewards for CDDL (which was itself  
 > based on the MPL) it was our hope to have created a license that made  
 > further proliferation unnecessary, so I am very keen to understand  
 > what needed fixing and why, and I don't see a red-line in your  
 > submission.

If nothing else, the license seeks, through its 3.2, conformity with a
standard.  The trouble with saying "you must do X" is that then
somebody needs to decide if you're doing X.  The license doesn't say.
For that reason alone the license should be returned to its author.

There are other reasons, though.  For example, the license requires
that you not commit fraud (if you offer a warranty you must not
pretend that UOML is offering the warranty.)

The license inserts a possessive apostrophe after "recipients" but
also uses the word "than" where "that" is called-for.  One must always
be carefull when corecting other's speling not to make any misteaks of
ones' own.

I did a crude (wdiff) green=CDDL red=UOML black=common diff here:
    http://russnelson.com/temp/cddl-uoml.html

I've entered the license into Trac here:
    https://osi.osuosl.org/ticket/137

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