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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple style='word-wrap:break-word'><div class=WordSection1><div style='border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 4.0pt'><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b>From:</b> License-review <license-review-bounces@lists.opensource.org> <b>On Behalf Of </b>Alex Williams<br><b>Sent:</b> Friday, October 16, 2020 11:47 AM<br><b>To:</b> license-review@lists.opensource.org<br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [License-review] License-review Digest, Vol 95, Issue 10<o:p></o:p></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><div><p class=MsoNormal>Assuming I throw out that provision, you mentioned the license is poorly executed. Can you tell me what other points I should consider for improvement?<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>If you are serious about this, I’d suggest you hire a lawyer for that purpose. That’s one of the reasons why the criteria for license submission says:<br>“Legal review: Describe any legal review the license has been through, and provide results of any legal analysis if available”<o:p></o:p></p></div></div></div></div></body></html>